I am down to arranging the title layout. The biggest thing I am thinking about is, well, the biggest thing. Hopefully this will be a more readable option when displayed in a smaller format (I.e. Amazon thumbnails).

Just to make it more clear, here is a side by side comparison of the two (being small).

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Either a more readable (although more broken-up) title, or a smaller line that shows off the background more.